Hello! I happened to come across this journal from a meme, and your portrayal certainly seems to be interesting and well-developed, though I'm afraid I haven't seen the adaptation of Bess's life in question, so I don't have much to offer there. I've just noticed the slight quirk you have of commonly miswriting "have" as "of" in certain contexts when they're homophonic - "should have", "would have", "might have". It's minor, but in otherwise tecnically perfect writing such as yours, distracting! XuX Thanks.
Hey! Thanks so much, I am glad you dropped by to tell me this~ C: I'm glad you like my portrayal, I get so nervous because she is so famous, haha! And as for this version, it's rather historically inaccurate, compared to others, but it's got such lovely characters, I couldn't help myself. I'd say give it a whirl if you feel like watching some fun period drama~
Oh I'd be the last person to call my writing perfect, for that reason and many more. (Not least of all my terrible habit of replacing words with other words for no damn reason!) But thank-you for pointing this one out, I will do my best to amend it. Though it'll take me a little bit to get into the habit, because I am a bit slow sometimes. Half it I swear is that no one points it out to me, so really you have my thanks.
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Oh I'd be the last person to call my writing perfect, for that reason and many more. (Not least of all my terrible habit of replacing words with other words for no damn reason!) But thank-you for pointing this one out, I will do my best to amend it. Though it'll take me a little bit to get into the habit, because I am a bit slow sometimes. Half it I swear is that no one points it out to me, so really you have my thanks.